|Subtle changes were made to make the idea clearer.|
It's definitely nice to have peers that can give you some honest feedback! While working on this piece, I found myself struggling making it clear that these two girls were twins. I played out some ideas in my head but wasn't fully sold on them. Luckily I was fortunate enough to have some illustrator friends that I can bounce ideas off of. I found having an open dialogue with others and being able to talk through the problem was very useful. The result - I feel - is a much stronger piece!
So thanks again my fellow MB Artists!
|Here's a previous version. It was a nice illustration but I was not convinced people could tell the two girls were suppose to be sisters...|